Raven: Necris – Now at 60,000 words

Those of you who have read the Raven of Iskandar Books (Raven: The Call from Central; Raven: Mirabelle; Raven: The Triballi Incident) would have noticed that the preface of each book is a continuing story of 102 year old Raven.

Raven: Necris continues the story, however, by the time I’d gotten to the end, I realized I would left things hanging until the next book. The last line of the preface (not much of a spoiler) is ‘She opened the letter’. I didn’t think it a good thing to let my readers have to wait for the next book to find out what was in the letter. So, book four will also have an Epilogue which will continue the story. However, it will result in a really sad finish to the book. Just a warning.

And no, I’m not killing off any major characters.

Approximately the last third of the book will be a little bit of a shock, it was to me when I wrote it! I had mentioned before that the series does have a story arc and in the first 3 books, it is mentioned so subtly that I don’t know if I’d even pick up on it. In Raven: Necris, it will hit you right in the face. It’s all part of a series of incidents that will lead to something already hinted at in the previous prefaces.

I hope that sounds mysterious enough!

All the Books of the Raven of Iskandar series are available on Amazon in both Kindle and Paperback formats. Just search on ‘Raven of Iskandar’ and they’ll come up right on top. Amazon still hasn’t straightened out that it’s a 3 book series so far, so you’ll see references to a ‘2 book series’. Phht!

Size Matters

You’ve probably noticed that in the Raven of Iskandar series that I exclusively use metric units (centimeter, meter, kilometer). For someone who was raised with the English system of units (inch, foot, mile), it’s not difficult to do the translation, but difficult to remember to do the translation. Sometimes, while editing, I’ll find numerous references to feet and inches that I have to change.

In the fourth book of the series, Raven: Necris, which right now is well over 50,000 words and counting, Raven makes a reference to how much shorter Chaoschick is.

So here’s a rundown, in English units, of the height of the members of the team.

The tallest on the team is Gothgirl (you thought that it was Grabby?). She is roughly 6′ 2″ tall. I envision her as muscular, as someone who had worked doing mining, but not unfeminine. She’s the strongest member of the team.

Grabby is next in height, being about 1/2 to 1″ over 6 feet. Raven is 6 foot tall. She’s slight (compared to Gothgirl) but strong. You wouldn’t want her grabbing any part of your anatomy in anger.

Chaoschick is two inches shorter than Raven at 5′ 10″ tall.

Skylla is another story entirely. Since she is part squid, her dimensions are semi-fluid. In fact, when they were attempting to record her statistics, Skylla would change her size slightly between measurements, pretty much driving the technicians bonkers. We’ll call her about 5’8″ because she usually looks taller than Dahija. If you read the story ‘Foosball’ you’ll have read that Dahija was of ‘moderate height’. When compared to who we’ve mentioned already, 5′ 7″ is a moderate height.

Lara Croft is also 5′ 7″ and, no, I’m not going to give any further dimensions. Suffice it to say that she fits her namesake fairly well.

Soria, the team captain is 5′ 3″ to the top of her head, 5′ 4″ if you count the ears. You know why that is.

Zinaida is 5′ 1″ and her Xeres hairstyle does look ugly to most of the Alliance. She’s a little sensitive about her shortness which is why she’s a fan of huge heels.

Finally there’s Calamity Angel. In order to really fly, nature made Pertescians small and hollow-boned. The latter is the reason that the team tries to protect her when things get wild off the field. She’s 3′ 11″ (well, she may have given herself another inch or two) and does weigh only 54 lbs.

So that’s the rundown and should give you some visual on how the team members relate to each other.

Boxers or Briefs?

This cartoon is from the currently suspended (for several years) strip ‘User Friendly’. It was about the workers in a Canadian Internet provider. It ran from 1997 to 2010, the last year and a half of that run was intermittent. Due to the age, some of the jokes are quite dated. However! This strip gives ample evidence of what happens when you don’t form a full sentence.

Again, I don’t know Illiad (J.D.Frazier) or are associated with him or the strip. I just thought it funny. They are still recycling the old comics so you can view them here:

http://www.userfriendly.org/

So I can’t let this go without some comment on the work in progress, Raven: Necris.

Currently the book is over 43,000 words and I’ve set a daily word count for myself. to put this in perspective, this was the same situation I started counting words as with Raven: The Triballi Incident and that topped out at over 200,000 words. There isn’t that many stories to tell in this one, so far, but who knows?

New Raven Picture

I put a new profile picture up on Facebook. However, it is very pixely. If that’s the way an iPhone takes a picture, then I don’t want one. ;-). The photo was sent to me via messenger, so that might have goofed up the resolution. I’ll have to talk to the photographer.

I really didn’t like the background of the previous Raven portrait on Facebook Raven of Iskandar Page, so I changed it to an action shot. I did play with the portrait in Affinity Photo and here’s Raven with a blue background. I did fool with the aspect ratio a bit as Raven doesn’t have a flat head. (You tell her that!)

What do you think? I can’t make the background white or black, or a light shade of purple. Maybe a light gray?